Wednesday, May 27, 2009
Weekend in Maine...
Tuesday, May 19, 2009
New friends...
I wanted to be sure to share this picture as well... Nugget is the kitten. A stray rescued from the pound by one of my nephews. Delta is the bunny... lost and unclaimed on a garden lawn and rescued by my sister.... They are fast friends who now sometimes share a nap. In this shot, Nugget fell asleep on top of Delta who just wanted to eat her carrot in peace.
The Iris has arrived and with it, Rainbows
Monday, May 11, 2009
Getting ready for the Peonies
Peonies are native to Western North America, Southern Europe and Asia, however, they manage quite nicely here in Connecticut. Best planted in the fall, the peony depends on that cold snap to bloom so mulching is not necessary. Cool well drained soil is best.
Sunday, May 10, 2009
Recap
So the rain stopped. The wind stayed. But still, it was a good day to garden. Today I was able to start some new projects and do some "housecleaning".
Saturday, May 9, 2009
Rain, rain go away...
Sunday, May 3, 2009
The power of punctuation
For me a rainy day is a day to write. I did in the early morning. Yesterday was also a day for me to visit the local garden center. The garden bordering the moon garden is on tap today. Some prep was done for this garden last weekend but today is the big day to replant it. It will be a shrub garden with a red theme. I also went to the lumber yard to buy new wood for the vegetable garden. I think this year we'll use raised beds. Anyway, more on this later. Let's look at the recent dilemma.
Editing is an important part of writing. Edit: thinks correct, adapt, cut, eliminate, revise, prepare [for publication] etc. I do a lot of editing of my own work but I also reach out to respected peer poets. In this latest case a peer expertly suggested a revision of line breaks.
18 lines tightened to 12
Impact: the poem is much more powerful because each line is strong -- less fragmented.
In the original version the line breaks of these words flowed as follows:
["the cut of blade jagged/desire unwanted/children..."]
The suggested edits are : ["the cut of blade -- jagged--desire /unwanted children..."]
The tightening is good. The problem is that it's not the children which are unwanted. It's the adult's presence unwanted by the child.
There are many possible additional edits under consideration.
1. put a comma after the word unwanted so it reads "unwanted, children..." (problem is the poem is w/o punctuation currently)
2. move unwanted up a line so it reads "jagged --desire unwanted/children..." (problem is the line is too long then -- breaks the rhythm)
3 remove the word desire (changes meaning)
it's not the only dilemma. I also have a decision to make with ["a penny in a fountain/ without water --we wish you gone --silent..."] vs. ["a penny in a waterless fountain/we wish you gone - silent/"]
Anyway. The poem is called Rough Cut. It's a day old so it's VERY early in it's editing lifecycle. Sometimes it's good to ponder these poetic dilemmas from a different vantage point. Say, the garden. The "red" garden. I think that's what I'll do!
Friday, May 1, 2009
Tulips fall prey to deer and spring rains
I have enjoyed my tulips for almost a week now...
A line from one of my in progress poems currently reads...
["drinking
tulips clink blush red cups
fall over in the rain"] (Eli)
This year at least I saw some tulips. I surrounded them with daffodils to hide them from the grazing deer. They love to eat tulips.
In this picture you can see Whisper who insists she is not the culprit who broke this stem.
In all likelihood it was Munchie. This tulip had the misfortune of being planted next to the catmint. Munchie can't help but roll around on it. He insists he's protecting it. I insist he's smothering it.
In the front garden I tend to stick to the lavendars, pinks, whites etc. offsetting the yellow and cream daffodils.
In the main back garden where we get full sun, I planted a mix of colors and bloom times. early spring, mid spring,late spring etc.
They are in the second layer of the border and intermixed between the summer bulbs and irises to protect them from curious doe. It was a risk but it seems to have paid off. The risk being that the deer might "step" into the garden to find them and harm other plants.
Anyway, I lost some tulips on the border but not many. Much better than last year.
And in this last garden under the pink dogwood, a garden which I have been slowly deconstructing, the tulips have arisen with a new fierceness. They will not be defeated.
It's inevitable I suppose that where I want to plant them the deer notice them. And where I want to move them from, the deer leave them unnoticed.
Now as a point of fact, I don't mind sacrificing a few tulips to the deer. I don't even mind that they eat them, really. It's a game. Find the tulips.
For the most part we learn that if we want to see spring bulbs bloom plant daffodils. We accept this. We may plant tulips. But after that, it's out of our hands.
I point you to the last line of one of my pieces is something my mother said to me the spring before she passed away... She was referencing the rain more than the deer when she said it after finding her front garden tulips beaten and battered by showers.
["This fall," she instructs, "plant
daffodils. They bloom so much
longer than the tulips" ]
I'm off to the opera. Have a great night! Eli